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Title: Dance.
| Subject: | Performing Arts | | Date: | July 24, 2003 | | Level: | High School, 11th grade | | Grade: | A+ | | Length: | 1 pages (227 words) | | Essay rating: | 27
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(total score: 59) | | Text type: | Creative Writing | | Keywords: | i dance, calm, everywhere dance, dance life, life is everywhere, life is beautiful, fun life, large amounts, endurance, workout, teamwork, appreciation, emotions, dedication, mistakes, confidence, |
Why do I dance? I dance to answer my own life's questions and sometimes even to calm myself. I believe that people do things for a reason and there's no better way to observe something you do than to put it into physical form and analyze it. Dancing keeps me calm because it takes large amounts of energy and focus. If I need to, I can channel my emotions into my dancing, rather than towards other people. Dance teaches me about life and life, in turn, teaches me about dance. Life teaches me that dance is beautiful, attractive, and fun. Life teaches me that dance is hard work and requires dedication. Life teaches me that dance is everywhere. Dance teaches me that life ... Showed first 120 words of 222 Size (words) ...
... Continuing with another 115 out of 222 Size (words) ...own life's questions and sometimes even to calm myself. I believe that people do things for a reason and there's no better way to observe something you do than to put it into physical form and analyze it. Dancing keeps me calm because it takes large amounts of energy and focus. If I need to, I can channel my emotions into my dancing, rather than towards other people. Dance teaches me about life and life, in turn, teaches me about dance. Life teaches me that dance is beautiful, attractive, and fun. Life teaches me that dance is hard work and requires dedication. Life teaches me that dance is everywhere. Dance teaches me that life is ...Essay still continues 100 more words...
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| Author: | | HeatherlyAJ | | Score: | | 12 of 13 people
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| | Date: | | 24 July 2003: 10:44:01 | | Title: | | Dance fever | | Comment: | | Beautiful Essay
I really feel that you truely love dancing. If I could give you any advice it would be to reach deeper into your heart when you write. You have many great ideas, you should try to elaborate on them. Especially in the paragraph that begins "For me...". You used so many wonderful adjectives in that paragraph to really give the reader a sense of what you felt, but try to say why.
Why is challenge good?
How does confidence make you FEEL?
You have a wonderful start and a paper that has some good emotions in it.
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| Author: | | xXRachXx | | Score: | | 5 of 7 people
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| | Date: | | 29 February 2004: 04:39:02 | | Title: | | Nothing left for me to do..but..DANCE! | | Comment: | | As a dancer myself, your descriptive words
were an inspiration for the way a dancer really thinks. Usually this is hard to portray because the expression is not through wordsbut through the dance itself. well done!
An inspirational piece to dancers. :) |
| Author: | | rikimo | | Score: | | 1 of 2 people
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| | Date: | | 09 August 2006: 06:46:15 | | Title: | | Great | | Comment: | | I like how its short, but sweet. Very descriptive! Great job :) |
| Author: | | Ltjgirl72 | | Score: | | 2 of 5 people
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| | Date: | | 16 December 2003: 18:51:50 | | Title: | | Comment | | Comment: | | I'm a dancer too, and this is exactly they way I feel about dance. It keeps me focused, energized and steady. Its a bit short, but good.
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| Author: | | ccmustangs2001 | | Score: | | 0 of 5 people
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| | Date: | | 04 October 2003: 12:29:44 | | Title: | | Dance | | Comment: | | A very insightful paper. To me Basketball is important...and basketball teaches me what you also learn through dance. A good paper. |
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